Mp. Jordan, TOWARD PLAIN LANGUAGE - A GUIDE TO PARAPHRASING COMPLEX NOUN PHRASES, Journal of technical writing and communication, 24(1), 1994, pp. 77-96
Complex noun phrases, although key elements in technical writing for l
inguistically mature readers, also present major comprehension difficu
lties for others. This article establishes many important ways of para
phrasing complex noun phrases into simpler structures, and identifies
the differences in meaning, style, is tone, and emphasis created by th
e paraphrases. Whereas many complex noun phrases at the start of the s
entence can be easily paraphrased, those at the end of the sentence or
embedded within the sentence present greater challenges. Similarly re
strictive post-modifiers are easier to paraphrase than those that defi
ne. The principles are applied to a short legal text.