To investigate how defensive motivations would affect patterns of language
use, the authors compared narratives of personal transgressions (about hurt
ing someone) against a set of narratives about making someone happy. Compar
ed to the happy stories, transgression narratives were more likely to descr
ibe actions occurring without deliberate guidance or intention. Length in w
ord count did not vary, but transgression narratives had shorter sentences,
especially in the sections describing the transgression and its consequenc
es. They had longer introductions, presumably to explain background and mit
igating circumstances. Transgression narratives featured the emotions and t
houghts of the narrator significantly more than did narratives of making so
meone happy (which focused heavily on the target's feelings), and they used
more adverbs and similar words to emphasize the narrator's emotions. Trans
gression narratives had fewer specific details but more (ostensibly) exact
quotations.