Previous research has shown that writing can contribute to learning, but fe
w studies have examined the cognitive processes through which this occurs,
particularly among elementary students. A total of 70 children in Grades 4,
6, and 8 carried out science experiments concerning buoyancy or the balanc
e beam, stated their explanations of the phenomena, and then wrote journal-
style notes while thinking aloud. Fifteen of the students constructed more
complex explanations during writing. Four aspects of the data were analyzed
: writing operations, transitional sequences among writing operations, text
features, and strategies for generating content. An analysis of these data
yielded 7 factors: Text Production, Searching From Experiment, Brainstormi
ng, Elaborative Genre, Goal Setting, Searching From Text, and Reviewing Bel
iefs. In a logistic regression analysis, Brainstorming, Searching From Text
, and Searching From Experiment contributed significantly to the likelihood
of explanatory gains; Text Production contributed marginally. It was concl
uded that for elementary students, writing-to-learn depends on strategies t
hat are diverse, local in scope, independent of one another, and moderate i
n sophistication. Instructional implications are discussed.